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i am

rough and dry
    so i won't kiss you
but your lips
    are pinpricks
warm like tea
    and soft like the feel
of sheets tangled
    in our hands
pressed flush with skin
    tender from absence
i sigh a little
    and you are sleeping
and reach out to me
    to disperse the ghost
that was the memory
    you formed along my back
every night, breathing
    hand trailing across
imprint of your heat
    and your heart
against muscle and bone
    before i slept and still after

you are home now
    and so am i
the house shifts
    recognizes
what began here a year ago
    and what continues
to linger
    it creaks--you stir

shh.
    sleep.
    it's welcoming us home
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This is the room, one afternoon I knew I could love you.
King of Carrot Flowers, Pt 1, Neutral Milk Hotel.


I love you.

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I LOVE THIS.

I can't really describe why.... maybe I just love the style, the descriptions and the way I can feel what you're saying... nicely done! :heart:

one little hiccup was when you went from pinpricks to warm like tea... cuz it was such a contrast but i got over it XD

--
It's not the load that breaks you; it's the way you carry it."
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Thank you. :)

--
You know, I still find you dashing

λΩλ

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